Journal 19
- I have taken a much different approach into my paper three than my previous two pieces of work. Instead of sitting down and isolating myself causing myself more stress and anxiety, during the brainstorming process I sat on my bed watching netflix with my laptop and letting whatever ideas flow through my mind and type them out. When actually writing my paper I still did isolate myself in my room forcing my roommate to leave for an hour every other night so I could write. This was very effective at various moments as it gave me the ability to when I have a lead to just write with no distractions at all. The challenges I have encountered were the anxiety at various moments of not knowing what to do next as well as trying to improve the flow on this paper than my previous two which I have been known to struggle with.
- This has been different than my previous two papers primarily based on the single fact that I am trying to improve my paper from the previous making it harder because that was my same approach from the second paper. In this paper three compared to the previous two I have tried to incorporate more tension in my writing. More article on article tension to enhance the point that I am trying to make which is what my writing has lacked or I have not done it in a very efficient manner than the previous two. In this paper I have also tried to create more of a dialogue with the reader. By that I am saying I have tried to transition the prompt into a much bigger conversation that relates to the society as a whole that the reader can question him or herself and if they want to agree with the claim that I am trying to make in my paper.
